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(( Before you read I wanted to do a vote on which Nordic this series should end with ))
((Also some constructive criticism might help a little bit~ Thank you~ Hope you enjoy the story~))
   You heard the sounds of sirens behind you as you fled from the orphanage. It had been years since you had seen your parents. They had died when someone shot them in the middle of their attack on the country of Finland. Your feet stumbled over a small ledge and you fell onto the ground. A squeal of pain escaped you when your head hit the cold pavement. Small puddles of blood formed around your head as you fell unconscious.
   ~P.O.V change~
   Berwald and Tino were having their afternoon coffee at their regular cafe, as they saw a girl run by the window. Tino glanced over to Berwald,"Hey... Do you think we should follow her to make sure she is okay?" Berwald simply grunted then nodded to his so called wife. They both stood up and walked out of the cafe, only to see the cop cars go by.
   Tino hurried up and speed-walked to where they figured she would be. As they continued along, Berwald spotted a figure out of the corner of his eye.
   "Hey Finny... Do you see that?" Berwald asked, turning towards the alleyway. Tino saw the small figure and moved over to it. He realized it was the girl and gasped. Quickly he shuffled out of his jacket and placed it on her bloody body. The Swedish man made his way over to the two and picked up the (h/c) girl, "We should take her home to treat her and find out what was going on, Okay?"The Finnish man nodded and they walked home, through the now quiet dusk.
   ~Le timeskip and P.O.V back yo you~
   You suddenly woke up, lights  burning your eyes from the sudden exposure to it. Your head was throbbing with pain so you reached up, feeling your bandages. You hadn't remembered putting them on but shrugged it off. Every time your fingers ran over the covered wound, you winced slightly. Soon you got used to it and looked around your new surroundings. It wasn't the orphanage, which confused you, until you remembered your escape the previous day. Slowly, you sat up, looking at the clothes on your body. It was a (f/c) dress with black lace trimmings along the bottom. One of your hands ran along the fabric; it was a lot softer than you were used to which made you smile a little bit.
   Suddenly an, an entertained chuckle came from the other side of the room, breaking tour train of thought. You saw a man with spiky, dirty blonde hair. he started to walk over to you, making you cower back in fear. The man sighed, "You shouldn't be afraid. Me and my friends are here to help you..." This only resulted in a quiet whimper coming from you. Silence filled the room until he coughed, clearing his throat, " I am Matthias...and you are...?"
   You finally spoke up, barely hearable, but it was an accomplishment, "I-I'm (y/n)..." The danish man sighed in relief when you walked.
   "Where do you live?" He asked softly.
   A quiet whimper came past your lips, "I-I don't have a home..." The dane looked at you questioningly.
   Matthias stood there quietly,the room filled with awkward silence. He coughed again, breaking the quietness, "Umm... Where are your parents...?"
   "I don't have any..." You replied, sadness filling your voice.
   ~P.O.V change~
   He sighed, looking at the girl in front of him. Maybe I should let her stay here... I mean we can't just send her back out into the cold... It would be cruel... He thought to himself. Hey maybe she will help everyone be more cheerful at the house again. He blinked, "You could stay with me and my friends if you want to. I'm sure they wouldn't mind " He sat up a little bit, "Let me ask them. I won't be more than few minutes, okay?"
   (y/n) nodded, "O-Okay..." He could sense the slight fear in her voice.
   "It's okay (y/n). You will be safe here." He assured her before standing up, "Just wait here."
   ~In the other room~
   Tino turned his attention to the door when it was opened by the danish man, "How is she?" Did she wake up? What hap--"
   calm down Tino... Listen, she doesn't have a home or parents, she doesn't have anything...So, I offered that she could stay here at our house for awhile..." The four nordics paused for a minute, thinking about whether or not they should let her stay.
   Berwald finally spoke up, "I think it will be okay, for now. I think when she gets older though that we should find her a real home." They exchanged a few glances then nodded.
   ~Back to your P.O.V~
   You glanced up when you heard the door open. Matthias made his way over yo you with a cheesy grin plastered on his face, "(y/n)!You get to stay with us!"
   He picked you up gently and carried you out to them, "Everyone, this is (y/n)! the newest resident to the Nordic house!"
Hey~ This is a little story I have been working on in school XD I couldn't decide who to make as the main country so I picked all the nordics XD

Nordics belong to Hetalia not me.

Chapter 1: You are here~
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5: [link]
Chapter 6: [link]
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Iammeepster Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Student
ImaginationSeeker Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer 
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death.Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or im sorry
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Dharvrani Featured By Owner Edited Dec 27, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I live in Finland and reading this... Something must be wrong with me.
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WolfBird2627 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
awwwww you get a hug!Hug 
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:iconxxvorlandxx:
xxVorlandxx Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist
My heart.... it needs a doctor. 
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:iconitsinmybloodyouknow:
Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Edited Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I choose...... :iconDennmarkplz:
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:iconnirvanarivera:
NirvanaRivera Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is cute! And I like the thought of ending up with Finland or Denmark~
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Alice-Vargas Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Sve Norge or Finn
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:iconsakikatkirishima1442:
SakiKatKirishima1442 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
finland ftw :iconawwyeahplz:
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:iconthecrazygirlwhokill:
thecrazygirlwhokill Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013
Norway Iceland or Finland
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:iconqueenofarcania:
QueenOfArcania Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
Denmark, Finland or Norway. I think a motherly, pissed off Finland would be HILARIOUS~!!!
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:iconkutaranow:
kutaranow Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
SWEDEN PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3
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:iconceciliethehedgehog:
ceciliethehedgehog Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
i choose Denmark :D
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:iconfullmetalmarti:
Fullmetalmarti Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Iceland please!!!
Ps: love it
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:iconmonkeylvr13:
monkeylvr13 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
aww poor reader! but i'm happy the nordics took her in.
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:iconinkheart4568:
InkHeart4568 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
guess i'll voted for Norge
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:iconpandachick99:
PandaChick99 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
norge plzzz :iconyaynorwayplz:
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:icontwilight-s-tears:
Twilight-s-tears Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Su~san
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:iconsakurai-sanxiceland:
Sakurai-sanxIceland Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
icey, plz? 川´・ω・`川
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:iconyasminapopovici:
yasminapopovici Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I VOTE NORWAY.
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:iconcheetahmorpher:
CheetahMorpher Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I vote for Norway :D Story is awesomeness!
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:iconblaze1893:
blaze1893 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Denmark I choose you!
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:iconanimegirl20922:
animegirl20922 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Finland or norway
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:iconmurderscreamer:
MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Professional General Artist
i vote norway... <3 I love HIM!
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:iconluna-the-puppy:
luna-the-puppy Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Iceland?? <--- my vote anywasy awesome story! please make more!
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:iconprincessfluffy:
PrincessFluffy Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Writer
love the story and i vote for Norway
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:iconmemichow:
Memichow Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Writer
ME WANT NORWAY OR ME SMASH!!!!MEMICHOW SMASH RAWR...im so sorry
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Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Vote counted~
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:iconmemichow:
Memichow Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Writer
is that Azusa as your profile pic,I LOVE AZUSA,ME SMASH!
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:iconkuro-shi15:
Kuro-shi15 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I vote Norway :iconyaynorwayplz:
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Vote counted~
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:iconkawaiipuppies:
KawaiiPuppies Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student Artist
Finland or Norway
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Russias-Maid Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Finland or Iceland!!! Anyway, great story!
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:iconstupidbread:
stupidbread Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Yay!
Also, I vote Norway!
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
T-This is great so far, but um, Just one thing.. Denmark's name is Matthias. A-Also, I vote Sve~! People shy away from him because he's 'intimidating', so he must be lonely.
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Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Okay and XD I thought I put Matthias. I will have to go over it then. *Le probably had a derp while writing*
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kolkolkol07 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Yeah I forgot the s on all but one XD Thanks for telling me~ ^u^
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awesomegirlO Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Finland, 'cause he FABULOUS.
(I can't wait for more!)
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Thanks But it might be a few days cause my friend is being all persistent on her story XD Also your vote was counted~
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andy4272 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
I think you should make the main country Finland
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
vote counted ^u^ Thanks for reading~
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:iconandy4272:
andy4272 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
np~:D
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SeeUtheVocaloid Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Gaah! I cannot choose! but I think either Norway, Iceland or Denmark.
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Tee~ Thanks for the votes and reading.
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AngeloTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
I like it so far! 8D
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Thanks~ ^u^
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AngeloTheNinja Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student General Artist
Np ^.^
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