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(( I don't think I need to put a censor on it, but there is hinting about a mature situation. There isn't any actual writing about it, just hinting. If I need to put a censor over this because of hinting, PLEASE tell me.))
   Sobbing, you closed your eyes tight as you plummeted towards the ground, bracing yourself for your impending death. Your eyes slowly opened after a few minutes, curious to how you survived without much pain. Through your watered eyes, you saw a blurry figure staring at you, “W-Who…?”
  The person wrapped their arms around your quivering body a little tighter, “You’re safe now… it’s okay…”
  Your eyes opened a little wider, “L-Lucas…? I-Is that you… Did you really come for me…?”
  He nodded, cradling your body close, “Of course I did… we all miss you, (y/n)…” You closed your eyes again, feeling too weak to hold them open any longer. Lucas bit his lip, worrying about you more as he saw the fresh bruises and cuts. He looked up, wondering why you had been falling in the first place. He pondered, not seeing anyone or anything in the window that would have made you fall. His mind instantly started jumping through conclusions of what happened. Quietly, he started to carry you back to the orphanage, kicking the door gently to improvise, not able to knock with your body in his arms.
   After a few minutes of waiting, Yao opened the door, looking at the two of you, “What the hell are you doing with one of my orphans!?”
   Lucas frowned slightly at him, “I came here to adopt her… but when I got here she was falling from the window. Care to explain that?”
   Yao looked him in the eye, “I know of no such thing happening and I know it wouldn’t. I treat them with the best care and keep pedophiles like you away from them.
   Lucas snarled at him, his blood boiling, “I am no pedophile! I just want to adopt her! If anyone is bad here it is you! You’re the one denying this child of a family and are failing at keeping her in decent health! I mean just look at her!” He motioned his head to the scars and bruises.
   Yao scoffed, “I’m sure you did that to her yourself!” He snatched you from Lucas, stroking your hair, pretending as if he cared, “Shhh… my darling you’re okay now… don’t worry, his sick hands are off you. You made a quiet whimper of protest in your sleep, squirming. The Asian slowly carried you inside, closing the door behind him. He walked to his bedroom, setting you on the bed, “You stupid girl… you will pay…” Yao locked the door then pounced on you.
  ~P.O.V change to Norway~
   I sighed, looking at my feet as I started to walk away. A sudden scream made me look back, running towards the house again. Nervously, I peeked into the window, spotting what I feared most, Yao was hovering over (y/n) with tape in his hands where he was trying to cover her mouth with it. I growled angrily, “I can’t believe this...” I started to reach for my gun but froze, knowing I would be sent away if I did, “I’m sorry, (y/n)… I’ll get you out as soon as possible…” He took a picture then ran towards the Nordic house as fast as he could, barging into the house, “Wake up! (y/n) needs our help!”
the next chapter.

Ch.1:[link]
Ch.5:[link]
Ch.6: You're here~
Ch.7: [link]
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SamanthaVargas Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015  Student Writer
Holy crap.... this is getting dark ;-;
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chica105 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Damn...romano much chica/avatarlover2
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avatarlover2 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
my 2p: hehe this is kinda funny
me: DAMN PANDA BASTARDO HOW DARE YE DO THIS TO READER-CHAN
2p: dude what are you talking about this is gold~
me: erin if you want to die I sugest you shut up
2p:-backs away slowly-
me:France and England (Abduct...) [V1]  ohonnonononon where do you think you're going?
2p:France (Crying) [V3] IM JUST GOING TO GET OLLIE-CAKES
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WolfBird2627 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Time to kill a bitch!:chainsaw revision Chainsaw Chain:la: :chainsaw: 
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LilWolfQT Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Romano (Curse) [V2] England (Evil) [V3] APH England: Scared  R.I.P my sanity...    SAVE ME Nordic 5 Mochi  PLS!  HALP! France (Denies) [V1] France (Denies) [V1] France (Denies) [V1] France (Denies) [V1] France (Crying) [V3] France (Crying) [V3] France (Crying) [V3] France (Crying) [V3] 
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xxVorlandxx Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014  Hobbyist
fudge just hit the fan. but i love your story, no matter how heartjerking it is. excuse me while i try to recover.
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FlawlessDeception Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NO! NO! YAO ISN'T LIKE THIS NO. CHINA IS MY FAV HE'S BETTER THAN THIS. DON'T DO THIS.
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TheFunnyOne2 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015
IKR?! I just replaced his name with my least favorite character because I love my little Yao <3 ~ *Grabs him from nowhere and hugs*
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Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Norsuko ande lef picturas.
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014
......... OK THATS IT SCREW IT IM AM LITERALLY THROWING PIlLoWS EVERY WHERE NOW!!
Glacier: T_T Imma translator dont worry...
Me: si geou svadri wux waoli vur loupon stuff doton sari wux zyak wux zahhar persvek phlita apato!
Glacier: .3.' and I thought you liked china....
Me: I did... but in this story.... si dartak jacida guts!!! >:L
Glacier: SPEAK ENGLISH PEEPS WANNA KNOW WHAT YOU BE SAYING!! >:L
Me: ti halkvri jaci ui loex.. persvek nomeno story ilrigan.....
Glacier: *sigh* T_T Ill get my axe.....
Me: YAAY~ :D
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ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student Artist
what she say? I only understand english and hello/goodbye in several languages.
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 7, 2014
Glacier: Meh dont worry... its called 'Draconic' or whateva XD found it through another story but here ya go:
1.) i will rip you apart and than stuff glass into you so you suffer in terrible agony!
2.) i hate his guts
3.) not until he is dead.. in this story anyway.....

Dere ya go XD
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ButterscotchRipple77 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Student Artist
thank you
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n0T3Z Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*falls on tiny orphan knees* WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! Yao I kinda hope you die in horrible agony and torturous pain of hell even though I used to think you were pretty chill. *pokerface*
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JackFrostLover012398 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
U R AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL @ UR COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconn0t3z:
n0T3Z Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconevilplz:
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JackFrostLover012398 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
Me: I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo not scared!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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JackFrostLover012398 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
IKR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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brutallyawesome108 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
YAY YOU GO NORWAY!!! SAVE ME FROM THIS HELL HOLE OF A PRISON ( if that makes sense )
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:iconnirvanarivera:
NirvanaRivera Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I used to like Yao but......I kinda wanna kill 'I'm now.
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AliceTehCuteFluffy Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
China you little piss fuck. :iconeridancryforeverplz:

I really like your story. It's really great!
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:iconimavirginiajones:
Imavirginiajones Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013
YAO U PEDO!!!! *shuns*
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MissStar489 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The sad part is I can hear Yao saying all his lines.
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Please tell me this is China's 2p... It is right? China is one of my favorite character and I can't imagine him doing this!!!
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Tailowb Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2013
Yeah he is 2p XD I couldn't pick who to make evil so I just asked my mom for a country and she said China so XD
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sonicgfriendKat Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist
u could have chose Prussia or Mexico she can be very mean
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:icongothicanimelover5309:
gothicanimelover5309 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Why is china the a bad guy unless he's 2p but I like the story
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
He is more of 2p XD I had to find someone to be te bad guy so I just went to my mom and asked for a random country. She said china so I'm just like, "Okay" XD
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gothicanimelover5309 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh good story through
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
Thanks~
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:icongothicanimelover5309:
gothicanimelover5309 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
=3= your welcome
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14pip14 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
Me: *calls in all my strength and lifts Yao up* THIS FOR BEING A COMPLETE LYING SHITFACE!!!!!!! *throws him out the window*
Yao: BIIIIITTTTCCCCCHHHHHHH!!!!!
Me: yea you know what i am.
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner May 23, 2013  Student General Artist
run norway run bake to the 4 norics and SAVE ME PLESAE FROM 2P CHINA HE'S A RAPES!
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:iconchocofernia:
Chocofernia Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
2P China ?
...... He took a picture..... oh my, hide the camera from France ;o
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Yeah. It's 2p XD I had to find someone to be the bad guy
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Chocofernia Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
He must have been desperate enough to do it with a child though.... ;o He has no love life ? xD
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HetaliaFangirl00 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student General Artist
*scared fangirl mind activated* NONONNONONONONONO :iconheadakeplz: DON'T RAPE ME CHINA! THIS ISN'T A LEMON! LEAVE ME ALOOONE! :iconscaredplz:
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xXxPsychoMonsterxXx Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
China how dare u I thought u loved children ...but not in that way
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larriss Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
More please :iconnekokikuplz:
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ceciliethehedgehog Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
*snif*...this is.....*snif* so sad......*snif* yet so.....AWESOME!!!
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Reshichu Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student General Artist
MoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
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REQ--Hetalia-Writer Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww, link me the next chapter when it's out? :>
AND AS FOR YOU YAO, (( I almost put yaoi... XD )) YOU SICK MAN. RAPING CHILDREN IN AN ORPHANAGE. YOU FREAKING. :iconmadspazzplz: I actually like China still but whatever c:
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Itsinmybloodyouknow Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hesvenda chinesah berstando per mar menid, hesvend nourt vortheses ourvendes timea
(He's just a Chinese bastard, pay no mind, he's not worth our time- Polentic)
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Tailowb Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
[link] Here's the next chapter ^u^
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Princess-Kittie Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
When is the next chapter?
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
Probably sometime next week since that is my spring break and I will have a lot of time to do it
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Princess-Kittie Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
Yay Ty ty. :)
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Kaytalia13 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
wait so Yao called Norway a pedophile but Yao..... when he was..... is Yao a pedophile then?
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:icontailowb:
Tailowb Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
Pretty much XD
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MasuraFox Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AW SHET.
YAO.
YAO STAHP.
I wonder if the asians had to go through this- *SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT*
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